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1. RE: About your poetry
Dec 29 2007, 8:36 PM EST
oh thank you so much for the kind words...I hope you don't mind, I looked through some of my past poems and chose one to write/copy for you now......"Prayer, Education, and Advise"... Hello again my Father, Another talk with me; Growing our relationship, From my heart to Thee. Learning through the word now, Reading most everyday; Beginning a new existance, In Jesus' name I pray. One day I heard him knocking, Then asked that he come in; Now I live reborn again, My Savior freed me of sin. We're given the gift of eternal life, Promise God gave us all; If only we just ask for, Be caught before you fall. poetrybybettye my wikis are michigan poet, religion and poetry, christmas poetry, and of course poetrybybettye.check 'em out if you get the chance...thanks for your time... ...."Have a Happy New Year"... 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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2. this is a poem i made i wanna c if others can read it if i do this
Jan 4 2008, 4:27 PM EST
you said you loved me why did that have to change you said you cared why did that have to change i gave u my heart my soul my life and you played me like a game you took my love for granite you took my childhood my dreams and you turnes it into a waste of time u made me emotional for a while heartbroken is what i became in the end it turned out that you lied you told me you loved me then you said you hate me what did i do to deserve this pain from a useless playa? sighned annonymous Do you find this valuable? |
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3. here is another thank u for reading im new @ this
Jan 4 2008, 4:36 PM EST
the midnight moon shines abovehis smiling face dines on hers that is such a shame cuz he is mine but what he dont know is he will pay he will pay a small price of his own life Do you find this valuable? |
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4. RE: About your poetry
Jan 4 2008, 4:38 PM EST
this is a really nice poem good worksighned annonymous 0 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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5. fantasy
Jan 4 2008, 4:41 PM EST
she has a lot of fantasysfantasys about puppys fantasys about kittens fantasys about poneys fantasys about life but what know one knows is she has fantasys about you 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
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poetrybybettye |
6. RE: About my poetry
Jan 4 2008, 5:22 PM EST
my wikis are...MichiganPoet, ReligiousPoetry, ChristmasPoetry, Poetrybybettye, AbusedPoet, and last but not least is AddictionAndRecovery...please check them all out ! Share what you write with me too...Thanks for your time.
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7. RE: this is a poem i made i wanna c if others can read it if i do this
Jan 4 2008, 5:27 PM EST
Yep I really like your poem, and its readable, though could use your spell checker, I do all the time 'cause it seems I think faster than I type....oooops Stuff Happens
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8. RE: here is another thank u for reading im new @ this
Jan 4 2008, 5:28 PM EST
this one sure says alot for such a short poem...i like it....Great Work
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9. RE: About your poetry
Jan 4 2008, 5:31 PM EST
Thank you so much for the compliment and for reading my poetry. My reply above tells of my many Wiki names covering different topics with poetry...Please check them out as well....Thanks again
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10. RE: fantasy
Jan 4 2008, 5:34 PM EST
I haven't decided just yet what I think about this one. I know its good, but I just don't know what I think about it right now...I'll get back to you....Keep writing...
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11. RE: fantasy
Jan 4 2008, 8:07 PM EST
thank you soooo much im realy glad yopu like it and read it you just made my day. i made an accout but i have a question. why do we need an e mail? the poems we make does that get sent to my e mail and does the comments get sent there? and 1 more question does the letters or comments we write get sent there? p.s i read some of your other work i think it is amazing i have other poetry i would like to share. i just started this. but too shy to let people i know read it or even know about it. thank you for your thime and hope to hear from you soon
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poetrybybettye |
12. RE: fantasy
Jan 5 2008, 8:33 AM EST
Hi again...Thanks for sharing your poetry and for reading mine too. I use AOL for my searching and my e-mail...And yep every message recieved is notified in our email, you just click on it in e-mail and it takes you right to the new message posted for you. It does it automatically whenevr someone replies or posts message to you here. You do not advertise your e-mail address here, like I said its automatic. And as for your poetry you should be proud, I think its awesome...Your Friend, BettyeP.s. Awaiting your next poem here, or in any other of my Wikis...Great Work 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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14. Another Poem
Jan 5 2008, 3:48 PM EST
The sunshine shines in the sparking skyButterflys fluttering in the wind The water reflects the sun sparkling in daylight Fish swimming in the deep blue sea Dolphins swimming and jumping What a beautiful seenary outside her window What a wonderful place to live what a wonderful thing to see 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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15. Another Poem
Jan 5 2008, 4:07 PM EST
We all see the hurt We all see the bruises We all know the truth We may ask but the awnser is always the same Im fine Thats a lie We know her parent hurts her We see the tears behind the smile So young so sad The neighbors hear But they dont say anything Why dont they say anything But one decides to say something In the morning But when morning comes it will be too late 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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16. RE: Another Poem
Jan 5 2008, 8:13 PM EST
awesome and beautiful thats what I feel when reading this one...great job
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poetrybybettye |
17. RE: Another Poem
Jan 5 2008, 8:14 PM EST
I feel of having been there and could surely relate...Great poem, keep 'em comin'
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18. RE: Another Poem
Jan 6 2008, 11:01 AM EST
thank you for reading them and complimenting them i rreally appreciate them ttyl
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19. RE: Hello again
Jan 6 2008, 12:35 PM EST
I enjoy reading your poetry...send away more..did you get my message about my wikis ? to choose the name of the wiki you are looking for, go to wetpaint.com and put in chosen wiki title to go straight to my wikis...at least thats the only way thta i know..Have a great day
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