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poetrybybettye
poetrybybettye
awesome poetry
Dec 1 2007, 9:44 PM EST | Post edited: Dec 1 2007, 9:44 PM EST
Wow, so much feeling in your poems that my poetry may not do it justice. Although, I do use much emotion, my poetry is somewhat smaller, of four paragraphs always, and always rhyming. But I have been very highly commended on much of my work, thus far. So therefore, I would like your oppinion of my type of poetry... Do you find this valuable?    
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poetrybybettye
poetrybybettye
1. RE: awesome poetry
Jan 4 2008, 6:30 PM EST | Post edited: Jan 4 2008, 6:30 PM EST
Hey everyone please check out my poetry at these of my Wikis...MichiganPoet, AbusedPoet, ReligiousPoetry, PoetryByBettye, ChristmasPoetry, and last but not least AddictionAndRecovery..Enjoy, share, and connect....Thanks Do you find this valuable?    
schizoclaud
schizoclaud
2. RE: awesome poetry
Jan 26 2008, 12:45 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 26 2008, 12:45 AM EST
Everybody has their own taste- my father would have understood and preferred your poetry- way over mine. he said poetry that did not have a rhythm and rhyming scheme was not poetry. My mother criticized my way of writing too - actually said a lot of free verse was "stupid". I th ink it all depends on the poem itself. Many of your poems have a soothing quality. Other rhyming poetry-not yours, but other's i feel sound like entries for a Hallmark card. And a lot of free verse can be almost as beautiful as music and some I have to agree with my mother- almost "Stupid!" Some of it sounds like the writer was playing a joke. SO -once again- it depends on the poem and how the writer uses words to get a message across. You d o very well at what you do- not to worry!!! Do you find this valuable?    
schizoclaud
schizoclaud
3. RE: awesome poetry
Jan 26 2008, 12:47 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 26 2008, 12:47 AM EST
I found a lot of poems in my collection appropriate for your different wikis. THanks for starting them and thanks for the invitations. Do you find this valuable?    
poetrybybettye
poetrybybettye
4. RE: awesome poetry
Jan 26 2008, 9:12 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 26 2008, 9:12 AM EST
Great news, I love your poetry...Thanks for sharing on my wikis. I truly hope you like the poem I replied to you with this morning. It is meant for you my friend...I am here whenever you need to talk... 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
schizoclaud
schizoclaud
5. RE: awesome poetry
Jan 27 2008, 2:19 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 27 2008, 2:19 AM EST
That was so kind of you to write such a nice poem just for me! I am not an addict but I would love to check out the wiki just to see what type of poetry people have contributed- actually I may have suffered from some forms of addictions,although maybe not drugs or alcohol, and I have been in the stae of recovery many times. I will definitely check out your other wiwis I haven't checked out. Thanks again for the poem- you are the best. 1  out of 1 found this valuable. Do you?    
poetrybybettye
poetrybybettye
6. Hello Friend...
Jan 27 2008, 10:52 AM EST | Post edited: Jan 27 2008, 10:52 AM EST
Yep, I am an addict in "Recovery" and very proud to have made it through. I am going on my third year, this year...But, as you said, I too have been in a state of recovery from life events, and struggles...I am so glad that you like the poem I made for you, I meant every word...I got interupted yesterday when I was replying to your email, and lost the letter I was writing...I shall be replying there soon, as well ! !
Have a great day ! !
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